Response Essay - Democratizing Twentieth Century America - Due Wed, Nov 5

Essential Question: Why then? Why did the Women's Suffrage Movement get underway when it did?
 
5 pages typed, double spaced, 12 pt font.What gains were won?  What gains were sought but not won?  If the reform was only partially achieved, what limited its attainment? 

1 page typed, double spaced, 12 pt font.

In this essay you must include evidence obtained from the following sources:

a) Howard Zinn - "The Socialist Challenge" and "War is the Health of the State"
b) Kerber, De Hart - "Industrializing America"
c) Who Built America? - "Radicals and Reformers in the Progressive Era" pgs 213-229 "Woman Suffrage", "Factory Reform and the Conditions of Labor", "The Garment Industry and Working Women's Activism", "Socialist, Marxists and Anarchists" and pgs 286-292 "Women Workers and Woman Suffrage"
d) Women's Suffrage Packet
e) Business of Being a Woman 
f) PBS American Experience - Triangle Fire
g) other selected class links and documents and film clips and class notes  

Rubric (seven categories)

Rubric for Essay

HISTORICAL CONTENT

16 - Demonstrates a clear and sophisticated understanding of the historical time period and the cause and effect relationship between significant events; accurately discusses at least 3 of the four causes of the Women's Suffrage Movement and several institutions and/or people involved. 

12 - Demonstrates a clear understanding of the historical time period and the cause and effect relationship between significant events; accurately discusses  2-3 of the four causes of the Women's Suffrage Movement and several institutions and/or people involved. 

8 - Demonstrates an understanding of the historical time period and the cause and effect relationship between significant events; accurately discusses 1 of the four causes of the Women's Suffrage Movement and several institutions and/or people involved. 

4 - Demonstrates little or no understanding of the historical time period and/or the cause and effect relationships between significant events; inaccurately discusses the Women's Suffrage Movement and/or several institutions involved.

ORGANIZATION

4 - Writer creates a well-organized essay.  Arguments and analysis are sequenced logically to support the claim.

Writer makes effective use of transitions to link all parts of the essay.

3 - Writer creates an organized essay.  Arguments and analysis are sequenced logically to support the claim.

Writer uses transitions to link all parts of the essay

2 - Writer creates a somewhat organized essay.  Arguments and analysis are not always sequenced logically to support the claim.  Writer attempts to use transitions to link parts of the essay.

1 - Writer provides very little to no organization.  Writer does not use transitions to link any parts of the essay. 

CLAIM AND CONTEXT 

4 - Writer’s claim provides a precise, nuanced interpretation of the sources that is grounded in multiple perspectives, historical, political, and/or social scientific context.

   - The introduction engages the reader and persuasively lays foundation for a passionate argument.  It identifies topic of the essay and provides ample contextual information that builds the readers’ understanding of the claim.

   - The conclusion continues and strengthens the claim.  It highlights significance, expands insight and makes recommendations for future action.  

3 - Writer’s claim provides a precise, interpretation of the sources that is grounded in multiple perspectives, historical, political, and/or social scientific context.

   - The introduction identifies topic of the essay and provides ample contextual information that builds the readers’ understanding of the claim.

   - The conclusion continues and strengthens the claim.  It mentions significance and makes recommendations for future action. 

2 - Writer’s claim provides a general interpretation of the sources OR a lack of clarity detracts from the claim.

   - The introduction identifies topic of the essay and provides superficial contextual information that gives readers a partial understanding of the sources. 

   - The conclusion summarizes arguments and restates the claim. 

1 - Writers claim only states a fact about the sources and offers no interpretation.

   - The essay lacks a clear introduction.

   - The essay lacks a coherent conclusion. 

EVIDENCE, ANALYSIS, AND COUNTER-CLAIM 

4 - Writer develops claim thoughtfully and persuasively using numerous relevant, convincing pieces of evidence from both secondary and primary sources (including direct quotation), and statistical/numerical data.

   - Writer cities specific textual evidence to support analysis of primary and secondary         sources.

   - Writer includes statistical data as part of the evidence to bolster claims and/or devalue counterclaims

   - Writer provides insightful, thorough analysis of the evidence to support the claim, using the following critical reading strategies:

Explanation of what the text says directly as well as analysis of meanings that are implied, hidden, hinted at, or left ambiguous in the text.

Analysis of how the authors’ word choices impact the biases of the sources.  Writer considers and discusses bias of authors when analyzing evidence.

Evaluates the claims, premises, and evidence in both primary and secondary sources in order to challenge counter arguments and bolster initial claim.      

3 - Writer develops claim using sufficient relevant, convincing pieces of evidence from both secondary and primary sources (including direct quotation), and statistical/numerical data.

    - Writer cities textual evidence to support analysis of primary and secondary sources.

    - Writer includes statistical data as part of the evidence to support claims and/or devalue counterclaims

    - Writer provides thorough analysis of the evidence to support the claim, using one or more of the following critical reading strategies:

Explanation of what the text says directly as well as analysis of meanings that are implied, hidden, hinted at, or left ambiguous in the text.

Analysis of how the authors’ word choices impact the biases of the sources.  Writer considers and discusses bias of authors when analyzing evidence.

Evaluates the claims, premises, and evidence in both primary and secondary sources in order to challenge counter arguments and bolster initial claim.                              

2 - Writer develops claim using some relevant evidence from the texts, including direct quotations that support the claim.

     

     - Writer provides a basic explanation of how the evidence supports the claim. 

1 - Writer uses irrelevant or insufficient textual evidence to support analysis of text. 

   - Writer’s analysis of the evidence does not support the claim. 

STYLE AND CONVENTIONS  

4 - Writer uses a range of precise and varied vocabulary to elaborate or clarify ideas. 

   - Demonstrates command of the conventions of capitalization, punctuation (extends to     hyphenation), and spelling consistently throughout the text.   - Mechanical and grammatical errors are rare or nonexistent.

   - Writer follows accepted conventions for formatting text citations such as MLA standards, footnotes, and parenthetical notes.  

3 - Writer uses a range of vocabulary to elaborate or clarify ideas. 

   - There are few mechanical or grammatical errors.

   - Writer follows accepted conventions for formatting text citations and adheres to MLA standards.

2 - Writer uses basic vocabulary to elaborate or clarify ideas

   - There are many mechanical or grammatical errors that do not generally interfere with the reader’s ability to understand the essay.       

   - Writer attempts to follow accepted conventions for text citations and works cited page.

1 - Abundant mechanical and grammatical errors interfere with the reader’s ability to understand the essay.

   - In text citations and works cited page are missing from the essay